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and the smoke rises, - Chemdog - 06-18-2016

one from one, herd
trois days


the heavens do open for them, they do
their shine, their beauty, their pristine nature
they're angels, are they not? honorable, truthful.

what is the symbol for america?
does it fly on broken wings now, or what?
does it soar crooked and untrue now,
cast out into the sea to wash up after the tide goes low

pearly and pale, shiny and smooth
it's the egg of the future, our redemption, our eden
follow the light, even if it's blindly
may the storms fail to swallow you up


slayer of doubt,
the color bone,
swift in the night
a guerilla of fright.

noun want, longing
crave, yearn, cupidity, fervor

S'il vous plaît, may i have some more?


The original form - they have the same colors among their flag as the good ol' USA. What's that eagle again?


RE: and the smoke rises, - Szeth - 06-18-2016

the heavens do open for them, they do - HEAVENS = PARADISE
their shine, their beauty, their pristine nature
they're angels, are they not? honorable, truthful. - ANGELS = PARADISE

what is the symbol for america?
does it fly on broken wings now, or what?
does it soar crooked and untrue now,
cast out into the sea to wash up after the tide goes low - SEA/TIDE = BEACH

pearly and pale, shiny and smooth
it's the egg of the future, our redemption, our eden
follow the light, even if it's blindly - REFERENCE TO STORMLIGHT, SOMETHING THE CHARACTER SZETH USES
may the storms fail to swallow you up - REFERENCE TO STORMLIGHT, SOMETHING THE CHARACTER SZETH USES


slayer of doubt,
the color bone,
swift in the night
a guerilla of fright. - all of these seem to reference killing, especially in secret, which ties into assassination, something the character Szeth (whom my Szeth is named for) is known for. ASSASSINATION = SZETH

noun want, longing
crave, yearn, cupidity, fervor - ALL SYNONYMS FOR DESIRE (DESIREA MEANS DESIRED)

S'il vous plaît, may i have some more?



Blocking Desirea from Szeth in Paradise Beach


RE: and the smoke rises, - Chemdog - 06-18-2016

damn you. got it immediately.