Winner: Erebor
He took more advantage of both the counter attacks and attacks allowed, and had just a bit more detail overall. But this was a pretty good fight on both sides.
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Erebor 6+ / 1o/ 1- = 8
Post I
+ Good job setting the scene/weather/general stats and such
+ Good counter attack, though maybe a bit more detail like is the heat kind of shimmery in the sun/is Fennick going to maybe have an escape of sorts from that, like will he see it and know?
+ Good attack, and I like the explanation here as well
Post II
o If he’s not running away from the bird, what is he doing? Trotting around, moving in circles still? I really that “running away” is more of a quip, but I would like some detail about how Erebor is moving
+ Good defense, and I like the explanation with it
+ Good counter attack
- You can’t assume that Fennick hit the ground, because he never said so in his other post, so this is a bit of power playing here – though I appreciate the attempt to take damage, for all we know at this point Fennick could have shifted right before he hit the ground
+ Good counter attack, though it’s also all kind of the same. No points off, because it makes total sense, but I like to be entertained too….can Erebor remove heat from something and freeze it instead? I dunno
Fennick 4+/ 2o / 1- = 7
Post I
+ Good intro
+ Good damage/defense to the attack
+ Good counter attack
o I feel like you could maybe have one more attack in here, since it’s one counter and one attack – the bird seems like a defense to me
Post II
- What about the pulse of heat that Erebor sent out? Did Fennick not feel it at all? Was it like an annoying poke? You just skip over that
+ Good counter attack
o What about your other attack though? Again, I feel like you missed an opportunity to maybe do more damage
He took more advantage of both the counter attacks and attacks allowed, and had just a bit more detail overall. But this was a pretty good fight on both sides.
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Erebor 6+ / 1o/ 1- = 8
Post I
+ Good job setting the scene/weather/general stats and such
+ Good counter attack, though maybe a bit more detail like is the heat kind of shimmery in the sun/is Fennick going to maybe have an escape of sorts from that, like will he see it and know?
+ Good attack, and I like the explanation here as well
Post II
o If he’s not running away from the bird, what is he doing? Trotting around, moving in circles still? I really that “running away” is more of a quip, but I would like some detail about how Erebor is moving
+ Good defense, and I like the explanation with it
+ Good counter attack
- You can’t assume that Fennick hit the ground, because he never said so in his other post, so this is a bit of power playing here – though I appreciate the attempt to take damage, for all we know at this point Fennick could have shifted right before he hit the ground
+ Good counter attack, though it’s also all kind of the same. No points off, because it makes total sense, but I like to be entertained too….can Erebor remove heat from something and freeze it instead? I dunno
Fennick 4+/ 2o / 1- = 7
Post I
+ Good intro
+ Good damage/defense to the attack
+ Good counter attack
o I feel like you could maybe have one more attack in here, since it’s one counter and one attack – the bird seems like a defense to me
Post II
- What about the pulse of heat that Erebor sent out? Did Fennick not feel it at all? Was it like an annoying poke? You just skip over that
+ Good counter attack
o What about your other attack though? Again, I feel like you missed an opportunity to maybe do more damage