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    COTY

    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura


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    oh hi
    #6
    I have looked into it more, and basically the clue you had was a good/strong one and would have been 100% acceptable if the character's name were Fenwick. Like you mentioned in your reply, the history needs to be a part of the clue. So if, for example, you had "there's a dairy farm on old Farmer Samson's land. It's by a marsh, but we changed the spelling of its name", or "there's a dairy farm on old Farmer Samson's land. It's by a marsh, and we replaced the W with an N" or something along those lines, it would have been successful.

    I'm going to go ahead and add this type of example to the Steal Guide because it's probably something that a lot of people would appreciate clarification on.


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    oh hi - by Shaytan - 11-07-2015, 03:25 PM
    RE: oh hi - by magnus - 11-07-2015, 05:38 PM
    RE: oh hi - by Shaytan - 11-11-2015, 08:23 AM
    RE: oh hi - by kahzie - 11-11-2015, 02:29 PM
    RE: oh hi - by Sarah - 11-11-2015, 02:35 PM
    RE: oh hi - by kahzie - 11-12-2015, 09:04 AM
    RE: oh hi - by Sarah - 11-12-2015, 09:08 AM



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