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    Assailant -- Year 226

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    "But the dream, the echo, slips from him as quickly as he had found it and as consciousness comes to him (a slap and not the gentle waves of oceanic tides), it dissolves entirely. His muscles relax as the cold claims him again, as the numbness sets in, and when his grey eyes open, there’s nothing but the faint after burn of a dream often trod and never remembered." --Brigade, written by Laura


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    Hi, I'm new.
    #8
    In my opinion (and I don't do much with steals so if someone else wants to weigh in as well feel free), if you're using definitions/clues that relate to a different spelling of the character's name, that should be indicated in the steal, as well as at least one clue to the horse's name as it is directly spelled.
    And while googling "fennick name meaning" does bring up resutls for fenwick, googling "fennick name" only has one result pointing to fenwick, and just googling "fennick" brings up no fenwick results at all (when I do it, at least). So the clues are a bit too removed from the orgiinal name for this to be valid, sorry.


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    Hi, I'm new. - by Tarnished - 02-16-2016, 05:11 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by kahzie - 02-17-2016, 12:41 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by Sprite - 02-17-2016, 12:50 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by Tarnished - 02-24-2016, 02:34 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by kahzie - 02-24-2016, 05:07 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by Sarah - 02-24-2016, 05:50 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by kahzie - 02-24-2016, 07:44 PM
    RE: Hi, I'm new. - by Cassi - 03-08-2016, 09:35 AM



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