09-29-2015, 09:47 AM
Warship 9+ / 2 o / 1 - = 12
Post I
o Good setup of location, though what’s your footing like?
+ Good first attack
+ Good mention of different escape options
+ Good second attack (bone bruises hurt like a mo-fo, my finger agrees with this….)
+ Again, good mention of different escape options
Post II
+ Like that you don’t forget about the storm
+ Good damage from first attack
+ Good mention of breed and the advantages
- Hurricane is aiming for barrel, not rump – it would be rump since Warship moved right, but clarify that in your post rather than me figuring it out
+ Good counter attack
+ Good damage from second attack
o Okay counter attack, but is a head really a likely tool for inflicting damage without just hurting Warships head? Chest makes more sense here
Hurricane 8+ / 2o / 2- = 12
Post I
+ Good setup of line of sight
(- Should include stats in the post -- I’m not counting this one though)
+ Good damage from first attack
o Want a tiny bit more detail on damage from second attack; where on the side did Warship hit? Middle? Front?
+ Good counter attack
+ Good description of options
o Would like just a bit more description of positioning before the second attack - I figured it out, but I had to pause and think, and I’m bad at thinking
+ Good description of second attack/possible outcomes
Post II
+ Good damage to first attack
- Which way did Hurricane turn? Last I knew he was still facing Warship, so more details here on position
+ Good counter attack
+ Good damage from the second attack
- Wouldn’t Hurricane be off to Warship’s side after he’s stumbled forward? I’m a little confused about the positioning right before the second attack
Post I
o Good setup of location, though what’s your footing like?
+ Good first attack
+ Good mention of different escape options
+ Good second attack (bone bruises hurt like a mo-fo, my finger agrees with this….)
+ Again, good mention of different escape options
Post II
+ Like that you don’t forget about the storm
+ Good damage from first attack
+ Good mention of breed and the advantages
- Hurricane is aiming for barrel, not rump – it would be rump since Warship moved right, but clarify that in your post rather than me figuring it out
+ Good counter attack
+ Good damage from second attack
o Okay counter attack, but is a head really a likely tool for inflicting damage without just hurting Warships head? Chest makes more sense here
Hurricane 8+ / 2o / 2- = 12
Post I
+ Good setup of line of sight
(- Should include stats in the post -- I’m not counting this one though)
+ Good damage from first attack
o Want a tiny bit more detail on damage from second attack; where on the side did Warship hit? Middle? Front?
+ Good counter attack
+ Good description of options
o Would like just a bit more description of positioning before the second attack - I figured it out, but I had to pause and think, and I’m bad at thinking
+ Good description of second attack/possible outcomes
Post II
+ Good damage to first attack
- Which way did Hurricane turn? Last I knew he was still facing Warship, so more details here on position
+ Good counter attack
+ Good damage from the second attack
- Wouldn’t Hurricane be off to Warship’s side after he’s stumbled forward? I’m a little confused about the positioning right before the second attack